watching

Where birds gathered on the flat roof below,
bathing in puddles, splashing water beween
feathers, now a snowfield without movement

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2 Comments »

  1. Oh Valderbar, what a wonderful free verse. So picturesque we can see it in our minds.

  2. Plain Jane said

    Brilliant!

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